When reading 1984, I enjoyed the amount of feeling and mystery involved in it. It seemed like a book that would be read if the reader has a strong opinion on the government, political lies and media manipulation. However, the book included a character, named Winston Smith who had these strong, personal opinions and also a liking for Jane.
My poem was a little weird in a sense, because of how I worded Winston's feelings towards Jane. In my opinion it was quite hard to write about his conflicting emotions towards Jane. Sometimes he absolutely loves her, but hen again he is envious and jealous about what she has.
In my opinion, a lot of my classmates and I tried to use similar topics for our assignment and we tended to try to rhyme or make it flow without rhyming. If I were grading my poem as a teacher, I would definitely like the word choice and language, but comment to add more into the poem.
In conclusion, I would want to change my poem by doing something other than rhyming and making it a basic assignment. I would reread the scenes where Jane and Winston interact, and base it off of that and their emotions.
My poem was a little weird in a sense, because of how I worded Winston's feelings towards Jane. In my opinion it was quite hard to write about his conflicting emotions towards Jane. Sometimes he absolutely loves her, but hen again he is envious and jealous about what she has.
In my opinion, a lot of my classmates and I tried to use similar topics for our assignment and we tended to try to rhyme or make it flow without rhyming. If I were grading my poem as a teacher, I would definitely like the word choice and language, but comment to add more into the poem.
In conclusion, I would want to change my poem by doing something other than rhyming and making it a basic assignment. I would reread the scenes where Jane and Winston interact, and base it off of that and their emotions.